I read this one on BBC radio some months ago and it seemed to strike a chord with a number of listeners. I suppose that many of us fall short of our earliest hopes and dreams and discover, often too late, that time takes no prisoners.
He dreamed of oceans as a child;
would run away to sea when grown;
might sail the chill Atlantic, wild,
or broad Pacific, tempest blown,
but grown to adulthood, he failed
in everything. There was no prow
or spreading wake: he never sailed.
He seeks his ships in bottles now.
Such a clever last line (which the photo prompted me to fully appreciate!)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jane. I read this one on BBC radio some months ago and it received good feedback.
ReplyDeleteVery, very clever!
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